Blake Alan
Sep 25, 2024

Ah, but Bob seemed so great (sarcasm).

Lena and Robin's first time together went as I imagined it probably would, awkward yet tender. Beautifully written, and then the line about them being at opposite poles was brilliant. Lena seems to still be hanging on for that love she was promised. And poor Maretta. Nice contrast as well between the two first nights of each married couple.

Blake Alan
Blake Alan

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I like to write, practice mindfulness, and introspect on life.

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