Are you kidding me?! This is dripping with rich evocative visuals surrounding a story I couldn't pull away from. Even after I finished it, I had to sit here and let it my brain marinate in what just happened.

There were so many great lines in this, and that crushing, I mean crushing realization at the end. I don't know how you made a 4min read feel as deep as a novel.

I loved this one! Great writing, Jay!