Hey there B-wing brother.

First, that last line. "A smile is not a smile if my ribs don't crack." 🤯 I know it's in your note, but it's one of the strongest endings I've read lately.

This piece is amazing! I really like the format you have with the lines switching from italics and back. It made it feel like the words were bubbling up from a lake and I was reading them before they reach the surface and pop, to be followed by the next line.

The verses themselves are pure art and relatable to me. I've masked myself with pre-approved behaviors so much that sometimes I forgot I have the mask on.

Again, the way you string words creates and scene filled with feelings that blow me away.

Thanks for this one!