I loved how you described everyone there and highlighted, either directly or indirectly, all these emotional states interacting. There's a web here that can tangle easily, especially at such an emotional time and place.

I couldn't imagine being in the main character's shoes, though I imagine they'd break in at some point 😉

The quiet assumed hostility from the biological father's parents adds some pressure for sure.

You really built up a scene, and I can't wait for chapter 3!

Who needs Netflix when Jay is dropping chapters on Medium? haha

Thanks for creating this!