Blake Alan
Oct 30, 2024

This line is brilliant, and it feels like it knows it, but it's not concerned. Like if it were a person, it'd give me shoulder shrug and say "yeah, I know..." and just walk away cool haha Amazing line though, well the whole piece is. So many cool poetic expressions sprinkled throughout making this such a great read.

And memory... yeah. Looking back on certain moments, I'm sure I was thinking about something and it was the center of everything, or so I thought. Makes me wonder what I think about now that future me will be like " I'm sure I was thinking of something that was bothering me.... oh well" lol

Thanks for this piece, Jill!

Blake Alan
Blake Alan

Written by Blake Alan

I like to write, practice mindfulness, and introspect on life.

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