Zachary is quite the character. I see myself in him and am simultaneously a bit annoyed by him. Just stay on point Blake... I mean Zach! haha

I love the way this is going. You have a knack for creating characters that instantly have distinct personalities. Such a cool thing to see happen as I scroll down the page because I've always had a problem creating characters in my fiction experiments. I admire others that seem to do that with ease.

By the way, very nice singing. You gave it the soul it needed and spread out the notes nicely.

As always, thanks for this one, Jay!